Reddit mentions of The Art and Life of Chaz Bojorquez: Curated by Marco Klefisch & Alberto Scabbia

First things first; don't host an album on your google account. I suggest you use imgur.com for a little bit of anonymity, but judging by your Username I'm not sure that you care.
now that I've gotten that out my critiques for you are as following:

• the E P connection looks really weak and I would suggest against it
  
• drop the wings for now you have no need for distracting add-ons yet
  
• the E underlining the word is not helping you out right now
  
  what I feel like a lot of people who visit this site don't realize is that super over the top stylized handstyle are all planned out and came to fruition after 100's of hours of trial and error and 100's upon 100's of notebooks that are all burned with just the nastiest handstlyes. Also I read in this book about Chaz Bojorquez that you should approach handstyles as you would approach calligraphy: you should spend most of your time visualizing the strokes you make in your head and doing practice strokes all before your pen touches the paper. This is why we chant the sub mantra so much " practice straight letters before you go on to something wild." They will help you visualize that when you stretch that bottom loop of a R all the way back to your vertical post you just made a B.
  
  Let me give you a little overveiw of my process when I'm developing a handstyle.
  what I like to do is that I burn thru notebooks practicing different variations of the word; and sometimes it changes to a completely new word. What im looking for is how the word looks as a whole. Is it leaning too much to one side, are the letter the same size, do they have the same kerning as the others, does it have the same font, and more. Once I've "burned" through my first "burner books" I pick up another "burner book" and just burn it with the one style I've decided was the coolest.
  
  This is going to be a long process and you wont ever be as good as you want to be, just don't give up when you aren't producing stuff you think you could do better