Reddit mentions of Legal Writing in Plain English: A Text With Exercises

• Typography for Lawyers.
  
  
• The Winning Brief.
  
  
• Legal Writing in Plain English.
  
  Also, get a subscription to the Chicago Manual of Style online. Look up every stylistic question you come across and make no assumptions.

As another lawyer, I hope you don't write legal documents the same way you comment.

• Improper use of capitalized words (e.g., "[b]attery," "[t]ort," and "[n]egligence"),
  
  
• Unnecessary use of legalese (e.g., "one," "said individual"),
  
  
• Improper use of "anyone" when you meant "any one,"
  
  
• Failure to properly use commas,
  
  
• Excessive use of "and" following semicolons,
  
  
• The use of gender-specific pronouns, etc.
  
  They're all giving me a panic attack for the legal profession.
  
  Fortunately, there are some very simple solutions for you:
  
  
• Get a membership here and start looking up questions when you have them. You might not realize it, but almost all of your sentences involve mistakes. So look them up!
  
  
• Buy and read this book, this book, and this book.
  
  You have a lot of work to do, but it'll be worth it when people start actually reading your briefs.